Write a song better than user above you!

[ourlioncub]

Tried to do a song from the same pattern:
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     tisk tisik tiks viod. not enoguh megalovanis   ! thhis song be    much much   c l e a n e r         

  

hope u enjoy        

the only way to beat a megalo is to-



post a AU ver

    lokks liike youm ppl still aint understand    dont worry tho    im will help u!   

first of all. do youm like pineapple on your pizza???   youm need more   in ur sicc beats!   herem, im helped yuom out. 

   

 hopy u enjoy  

Too intense. You need something soft. And not copied and dischordant. 
Also I have a few bad guy songs that excell above this.

should i participate

i'm going to participate

even though i already made this

i'll make something original eventually i swear



i also need to practice improv percussion