11-06-2014, 10:50 PM
Ayy here's my 2 cents
The problem with some of your songs is that they do not adhere to a key. I'll try to explain this simply:
The key of C major contains seven notes—C, D, E, F, G, A, and B. These notes sound nice together, so if you're making a song in the key of C major, you'd only use those notes in the song. If you happen to use a note that is not in that key, it sounds weird; and I think as long as if you're not tone deaf, you'll be able to hear the 'weirdness.' These 'weird notes' are called accidentals.
I made a sequence to demonstrate this. Gee, I wonder what the wrong note is?
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also disclaimer I am not a master of music theory so feel free to take this post with a grain of salt
The problem with some of your songs is that they do not adhere to a key. I'll try to explain this simply:
The key of C major contains seven notes—C, D, E, F, G, A, and B. These notes sound nice together, so if you're making a song in the key of C major, you'd only use those notes in the song. If you happen to use a note that is not in that key, it sounds weird; and I think as long as if you're not tone deaf, you'll be able to hear the 'weirdness.' These 'weird notes' are called accidentals.
I made a sequence to demonstrate this. Gee, I wonder what the wrong note is?
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also disclaimer I am not a master of music theory so feel free to take this post with a grain of salt

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