06-02-2015, 07:46 AM
(05-31-2015, 07:30 PM)Lempillsk Wrote: postin my 2 cents
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seems pretty random; the guitar doesn't seem to have a clear rhythm to it
also there's no real melody so it's pretty 'eh'
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By how this song sounds, I would describe this as 'odd' or 'quirky' more than 'cool' (not that this is a bad thing though)
The ending is pretty abrupt and makes the song sound incomplete, even as a sequence that is intended to be short
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It's pretty cool, an extended version would be nice
Thank you for the criticism, I will use that to improve. If you want, you can collaborate on the third song that you thought that would be cool if it was extended.