Help needed!

[I3etFI]

I doubt anyone here is a professional EDM artist to make any constructive comments, including me, but I'll try. I hope you like nitpicking

1. In the vocals, you should cut off those "preparatory breaths" that the vocalist makes right before singing, since it sort of feels abrupt (for lack of a better description)
It is particularly noticeable at 0:17 and 2:01

2. Don't know if it's just me, but I can hear these slight clicking noises at 1:54-2:00
The clicking is on rhythm with the music though so maybe it's intentional?? who knows

Can't really think of much else to say, it sounds bretty good to my untrained ears. I once attempted to learn how to use the synthesizers included in FL Studio and it was just confusing as ***** rofl
Also out of curiosity, what's the original song anyway

My excuse for most of that is I haven't polished the song yet. It's still a WIP so things like abrupt vocal and slight distortion will still be there, but thanks a lot for pointing it out. :D

And here's the original song for all those who are curious:

https://soundcloud.com/wearemeakii/memor...-hollivana

And about the synthesizers, just have fun with em. They might seem overwhelming at first, but after a while, you'll find yourself looking for even more complex plugins XD. If you're talking about Harmor, I would gladly help you with that :>. Still hope that we can do another collab, but with FL studio instead fo this site