12-22-2020, 10:37 AM
(12-20-2020, 11:20 AM)blobertthebob Wrote: lucent i don't think you ever finished deciding on my rank i would appreciate it delivered in a timely manner yw
It's been a while since I saw you on the site. Your stuff wouldn't have had a harsh ranking back then, but I feel your sequences belong at a C rank in today's terms.
Every sequence I've clicked so far seems to be unremarkable for me to critique but none of it's actually bad—just needs more fleshing out.
Melodies are okay to listen to but they just feel really stagnant to me. Personally I think the percussion is doing a disservice to the melodies because it's supposed to provide pacing to the sequence. When the percussion is equally as clunky to the melody, it's easy for the melody itself to feel dead. When practicing percussion, I think it's easier to work with more upbeat music before slowing down and getting more detail-oriented.
Based on your composition style, I recommend taking notes from Syntax or Tib or even Mystic since I would think you would end up similar to them if you used the site more.