[Forum Game] Story Writing on OS

[Benvisions]

Battle log for scary monster
1. Benvisions did a jump sword attack for 100 HP
2. Larry uses fire for 120HP
3. Bentoonie used a glitch for 50HP (Totals 170HP: 2000-270=1630)
4. A scary monster attacks them all for 60HP (1250-60=1190 and 1000-60=940 (bentoonie))
5. Larry strikes fire for 100HP
6. Benvisions did a series of attacks for 200HP
7. Bentoonie uses a poison bottle to poison him for 1 turn.
8. Larry made thunder for 120HP
9. Benvisions did a jump sword attack 310HP
10. Bentoonie did a blackhole for 240HP (1630-970=660)
11. A scary monster does 500HP damage on all of them (1190-500=490 and 940-500=400 (bentoonie))
12. Benvisions did a series of attacks to kill the enemy.
Any changes needed?