Suggestions on making this song flow better

[Lopyt]

There are many problems with that song. First of all, there isn't enough repetition. You need to repeat sections so the song sounds focused and not random. Its helpful to make the sections fit between the thick lines on the grid. The other problem is the drums sound bad, with the flamming. And third, when the instruments come in they are all trying to be the focal point so it sounds like a mess.

Tip: you don't need reverb on everything