Want some Ideas?

[Jonah]

One thing that bothered me was the OP. You said you are an "actual musician". I have no problem with this alone; by definition, you are an actual musician... but so is everyone else on this entire website. My problem is the way you worded it as if you believed only people who play or create classical music are musicians, and that people who make EDM are especially unmusical. I'm not personally offended by that, because I know you didn't mean it that way, but I'm guessing that some people are going to, or have, taken it the wrong way. It's a pretty small mistake, but I'd suggest rewording the OP so the message isn't misconstrued.
Now, back to the music. It's really good, and it gets better the more recent it is, but it still feels like it's missing something. I think the problem is that you mainly focus on chords, but then you don't make any parts where there aren't chords. ... I feel like there was a better way of describing that, but I failed entirely. Take Eric's song, [url=]Path of the Warrior[/url]. This song is very powerful. The difference between his songs and yours are that his have parts where only one note is playing, parts where two notes are playing, three, four, so on. Anyway, Your main problem is that you skip the build up and go straight into full chords. This causes a few problems for the audience. One, it takes away the depth of power for the song. The one/two note parts of Path of the Warrior are light, whereas the parts with full chords are heavy. He uses this to change the dynamics of the song at certain times, which you can see inside the song if you look. (Not going to try and describe a certain part of the song with words. I can't even describe words with words lol) Anyway, it doesn't take you long to notice how the beginning builds up from small 1-2 noters (Not the official term, IK) to full blown chords. You are missing the 1-2 noters. You got the big 3-5 noters down, but you still need the 1-2 noters. After all, an elephant doesn't look big next to a ton of other big elephants. You need to see something smaller as a ... reference point, I guess..

Hopefully this isn't going to be "Tl;dr"