Song/Collab/Review Megathread (For all)

[Jonah]

Hello, I'd like to have a feedback on this music I composed for a personal project (not developed yet).

https://www.dropbox.com/s/2ag8b9snnmtabj...g.m4a?dl=0

(I won't post the link for this sequence as it sounds completely messed up when you load the MIDI in the editor of that site


My knowledge in music theory is (really) extremely limited. I made that on a MIDI app called Xewton Music Studio on my iPod few years ago.

So, I'd mostly like to know what could be improved in that piece, and what does / doesn't work.

Thank you in advance =D

First off, Really great song. It's got a nice start and it keeps it up throughout the majority of the songs. 

A few slight things I would work on are 1. Using a different sound than the pluck for the low part. I think the pluck sounds nice, but it just doesn't seem to fit too well imo. (It might just be that specific pluck, just change it a bit to sound more like an acoustic guitar or something and it'd sound great.)
2. Editing the pluck to sound more... plucky. It, again, sounds great, but I think it sounds almost like a pluck combined with another sound (almost like a nail tapping on a table) If you could change that slight thing, the quality, I feel, would drastically improve.

Anyway those were just small things I saw. Even though this post was mostly criticism, I still liked the song a whole lot more than I didn't. If you can't edit sounds directly, maybe you could just change the lower one to an acoustic guitar or a bass of some kind and maybe play around with that a little bit and see what sounds good.

Again, I really enjoyed listening to this song, I wish you gl, seeya.