Song/Collab/Review Megathread (For all)

[Jonah]

onlinesequencer.net/418784, onlinesequencer.net/418784 what do you think?

I actually personally really like this.
I really like the A#7 like Ash, it sets the tone for the rest of it.
I think you did a great job with the instruments, but I really can't hear the acoustic guitar so maybe try adding another layer of that.
Another thing I would suggest is adding percussion.
A lot of people (including my past self) seem to feel intimidated by percussion, and say stuff like "I'm just not good at percussion, I'll focus on the other things"
But, the percussion is an essential piece in any form of music. One extremely simple thing I can suggest for the percussion is to Copy/paste the A#7s and change it to percussion and just move it around and see if you like it anywhere. I'd try Mute Triangle.

Anyway, I was pretty impressed by this song, especially for such a new user. I think it would turn out well if you kept working on it and made it longer.
I look forward to possible future updates?