02-28-2017, 10:01 AM
(02-27-2017, 05:18 PM)CelZero Wrote: onlinesequencer.net/418784, onlinesequencer.net/418784 what do you think?
Definitely not a bad song! It's short, but catchy. I like the tune you have going on for the most part, but to me, it feels like there is a bit too much going on at once. If it were me, I would get rid of the Sci-Fi and the Acoustic guitar because as it stands now, it muddies up the sound and isn't adding too much of value to the loop. The A#7 as a consistent note is fine, but to make it a little "smoother" and more pleasant I would maybe bring it down an octave and change it to smooth synth. If that is not loud enough for you, you can put two layers of it to make it louder. The chords are good but could use a little more variation. For example, you could add a note to help the transition to the next chord. Also, because the base doesn't have too much of a plucky sound, you may benefit from putting the grid on 1/4 and placing notes on each spot instead of with placing them at the same points as the chords. That would add a little bit more of a consistent depth to the song. Honestly though, I think that this song is good and catchy. Great job!