Song/Collab/Review Megathread (For all)

[blobertthebob]

Hello, I have two songs that I would like some feedback upon;

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I only have a basic understanding of composition, so any feedback is welcome. Also keep in mind that while the first piece is an original, the second is not.

Thanks in advance!

The first one is great. Nice use of chord progressions to create a catchy melody. I recommend adding some other instruments to the mix (also grand piano is better than electric).