03-11-2017, 09:02 PM
In my opinion. the first 7~10 seconds were pretty interesting. The overflow of the notes on the lower side was totally a drawback. On the other hand, to be honest, i want to make a metal arrange with those 7~10 seconds and improve the rest of your melody, if you let me. I can take a "NO" for an answer.
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