Song/Collab/Review Megathread (For all)

[Jonah]

Hello, I have two songs that I would like some feedback upon;

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I only have a basic understanding of composition, so any feedback is welcome. Also keep in mind that while the first piece is an original, the second is not.

Thanks in advance!

Sorry for the late response.

I think the first one was good. The second one gave off a kinda too long; didn't listen vibe though. I think the first one sounds more like a song that would have a lot of instrument variety rather than just piano. Percussion at the beat would work well too. I think the first one shows potential.