Song/Collab/Review Megathread (For all)

[Jonah]

I'd like to have an overview on this, please.

[url=][WIP] Reminiscent Of Nothing In Mind[/url]

Also a few notes to keep in mind, if this sequence sounds similar to anything you've heard before then that is intentional.
Future Luneric project to get in before Eric's birthday, just need a commentary before I get too far with progress.

Kinda just want to say it's trash, but I'll pretend this sequence is worth my ears for the sake of PR. (Still not really pulling punches though. Also not going to compliment you.)

First: Like Wuggie said, too many notes in one place. A good thing to remember is to stick to what is playable on the piano, especially for an all piano song. (10 notes max)
Second: I noticed this was sort of like a remake of Stars
Third: The 6th measure and all the places it repeats aren't very good.
Four: 18th to 19th measure transition kinda comes out of nowhere. It goes from a 7 to a 4 in an instant and then 3, 2 and 1.
Five: Measure 35 is out of place and terrible
Six: The ending is bad
Seven: You use dissonance throughout the song A LOT. I don't dislike dissonance, except when it's piano and it occurs every 2 seconds. It almost sounds sort of detuned. Not totally bad, but you do this in every song and it's getting old. You're still young, learn some new tricks to rely on while you can.

sidenote: 90% sure Lucent will come up with a rebuttal for every single point I just made.