Song/Collab/Review Megathread (For all)

[GrumblePuppy]

Hello, I have two songs that I would like some feedback upon;

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I only have a basic understanding of composition, so any feedback is welcome. Also keep in mind that while the first piece is an original, the second is not.

Thanks in advance!

Hi Swiwious. I liked both of your songs. Both are very clean. You might want to experiment with inserting some notes of different lengths and also adding some violin. But overall I think your songs show a good grasp of basic composition. Look forward to hearing more from you.