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will this turn into a massive collab?

and possibly?

"It become massive collab if want to become one"
-confucius

CHANGE LOG:
-In the 'B' Section, you had changed a C#7 chord to what I can only describe as G-double-sharp-5(G,B,E,and F).  I personally think that the C#7 sounds better there, but if you're dead set on the other chord, Ill concede.
-In the 'C' Section, I made the left hand piano part have better voicing on some chords, as well as taking creative liberty filling in the third note on any chords with only two notes.
-Various chord adjustments all around, like sneaking in a cool A -> D -> Gmin chord progression right before the halfway mark of the C section to add some much needed dominant function to that line

[EDIT: forgot to say that I didn't touch the new 'D' section yet.]

'seen.'