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I did a thing
Jay2k
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#1
02-06-2016, 04:59 AM
https://soundcloud.com/faxonfury/electroplasma

I would like to hear your feedback on this song, it would be very much appreciated!  :D
Song was created in FL Studio 11


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Local Nobody
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#2
02-06-2016, 05:24 AM
I love that song!


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Jay2k
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#3
02-06-2016, 05:47 AM
Thanks a lot! ^^


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#4
02-06-2016, 08:40 AM
What!?

That. Was. AMAZING!!!!


If you were a bloon, wouldn't you rather be popped then wither away into an undignified husk? Since bloons can't talk, I'll guess we never know.

:D
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02-07-2016, 11:10 AM
(02-06-2016, 08:40 AM)blobertthebob Wrote: What!?

That. Was. AMAZING!!!!

agreed.


----Lkigoo  :D
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#6
02-07-2016, 01:12 PM
Haha, it's good knowing that you're finally spending your skill on a much more sophisticated platform than this site Smile

The arrangement is okay, tho the melody and chords are definitely not for EDM, it's too cheesy and sadly not catchy at all. Drums should be louder, some synths are too loud compared to the rest, which gives you this unnatural feeling when listening to them.  The song is repetitive, I believe you copy and pasted your drops? 


I'm guessing you have only been using this software for about 1 to 2 months. There's many more problems that I would point out, but it's better for you to keep exploring the DAW. I would love to do another collaboration with you, using a more professional software.


I'm All EDM, Baby Cool.

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Jay2k
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#7
02-07-2016, 11:22 PM
Thanks for the in-depth feedback, I3etFI! And yes, I've only used this software for about 2 months only, so my music still definitely needs a lot of work, but I'm going to try to be better at it!


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Jay2k
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#8
02-14-2016, 02:57 AM
I did another one, quite proud of this one :3

https://soundcloud.com/faxonfury/the-spa...ratosphere


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