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[Moonlight_]

At first, I just made it for fun, but then I found out this thread existed

[Cool172]

hello cool172, this is my bit so far, how can i get better production on it, similar to yours? I think the harpsichord sounds off slightly

did you send the wrong sequence? there is no harpsichord there and it was made by fox

[Goods On]

hello cool172, this is my bit so far, how can i get better production on it, similar to yours? I think the harpsichord sounds off slightly

did you send the wrong sequence? there is no harpsichord there and it was made by fox

sorry i am very stupid wrong copy 
[url=]Sequence #3630178 - Online Sequencer[/url] 
this is my sequence i meant to send, love to hear feedback

[Cool172]

At first, I just made it for fun, but then I found out this thread existed

I can see this working if you repeat the synth melody you wrote and add a simple kick snare drum pattern with 909 or 808 drums.  if you want to add bass you could use the pattern A for a whole measure, then F, D, C. add rhythm and intricacy as you like

[Cool172]

hello cool172, this is my bit so far, how can i get better production on it, similar to yours? I think the harpsichord sounds off slightly

did you send the wrong sequence? there is no harpsichord there and it was made by fox

sorry i am very stupid wrong copy 
[url=]Sequence #3630178 - Online Sequencer[/url] 
this is my sequence i meant to send, love to hear feedback

To make the harpsichord clearer, you could lower the reverb volume to 50% and raise the high eq to a normal level.  the strings at the end are really cool u should do more with that part

[Goods On]

hello cool172, this is my bit so far, how can i get better production on it, similar to yours? I think the harpsichord sounds off slightly

did you send the wrong sequence? there is no harpsichord there and it was made by fox

sorry i am very stupid wrong copy 
[url=]Sequence #3630178 - Online Sequencer[/url] 
this is my sequence i meant to send, love to hear feedback

To make the harpsichord clearer, you could lower the reverb volume to 50% and raise the high eq to a normal level.  the strings at the end are really cool u should do more with that part

Thank you, the harpsichord was the bit i was unsure about, gonna develp the next section too

[mckenzie_teasley8]

post sequences here and i will give you my honest feedback and answer any questions you have
😱

[Cool172]

post sequences here and i will give you my honest feedback and answer any questions you have
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the rhythm could be more interesting if you arppegiate the piano chords instead of playing them all together (meaning that you play the notes apart from one another instead of all 3 notes of the triad at once)

[Civigod2]

who made this

[Cool172]

who made this

i don't know, but the piano seems very random and the bass is too loud